Opening Verse of the Saga of the Bear-Folk (Revised)

I recently updated my opening poem to the Saga of the Bear-folk, with that I needed to update the language. Here is the updated poem! I've also begun to create the language of the Fae creatures in the adventure I've been writing.

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Skarrn:

Lo!

Hjer byrja ferdhalakkar fra Bjorgdunar

Jog fra aegisagr thaejar…

Thekksagr byrja

Hvenr runekorn avsolja

Idh Rytarrskegg

Harrik, viedunnath-megg

Rugla megg skjirkorn

Seiflath fra Bjordunnar, Ivrik Arnbjorg dun nuldorn

Nefingja brrodhath halkur dhing

Tala fra gothing

Avsulta hultn

Brrodh fra gultn

Bafudhra tredhorn

fra runekorn

Harrik fra viedunnath-megg sorn

"Ath finga korn,

Sjodmad, sithur Nartr-frottr

Strarg fra assmattr.”

Thar a mokkithr vittegg

droppen far mugg fjltegg

fjltegg sithur himokk

Unni gothing slettlokk”

Translation:

Lo! 

Here begins the journey of the Bear-Folk,

and their Epic Saga

This story does begin,

When a rune-stone was discovered

In Rytarrskegg

By a fisherman called Harrik

Bemused by the strange monolith,

The Bjordunnar Chief, a man named Ivrik Arnbjorg

Called forth the the clan for a meeting

To discuss this discovery

It was decided,

That a group of warriors,

Be sent to investigate 

The rune-stone

Harrik the Fisherman said,

“That to find the stone,

One was sail north-east

along the coast.”

Until a great white tree

is spotted at the mouth of a river

Then one must sail up river

Until you come across a placid lake.”